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Dang, Chao is such a cutie but alas...

Omg, this is such an addicting read! The build-ups and revelations of the mystery were all so intriguing! I esp loved our MC in this, and like how others mention just how much of sketchy freak they are no matter what route you take. (And the spicy scenes were, mwuh, chef-kiss!)

I also love the visual presentation here with the black/white backgrounds and the use of pink here and there, especially with the CGs.

Yee, this was fun read! Needed more Geraldine, tho lmao <33

THANK YOUUUUU!! Your comment motivates me a lot <33 I'm happy you enjoyed playing my game, with all its ups and downs!!  Hugs and kisses from our totally, definitely normal MC, and from the people's beloved grandma ;)) 

Thank you again! <3

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Just got ending 4/4 and I love it. MC and Chao are the very definition of matching eachother's freak but in such a romantic way. Both MC and Chao are very interesting characters!

YESSSSSSS I wrote it with matching each other's freaks in mind!! Thank you so much for playing, and I hope u enjoy the other endings too! <3

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Hello, I enjoyed the game, esp the ambiguity was exciting <3 Not to mention it is actually finished! :v

Some random stuff that caught my attention while reading:

- "a BURST of pent up passion BURSTs within"

- "silence descends IN the room" (Should be ON or upon)

-"his slow violence is learning to be reigned in with great effort" (This sentence sounds like all its words were put in a bag and shook very hard)

- (Describing Chao's demeanour) "he brings himself" (instead of carries himself)

I'm sure there's more, so the text could use some fixing up! 

I'm not saying this to nitpick, but because I know how hard it is to see one's own mistakes and I'd rather take a little time to point them out to you instead of shrugging and moving on... 

So yeah, thanks for the cool game!  :v 

If you want me to pimp your English, my email is on my profile

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Oh my God yeah I didn't notice 😭😭 Thank you so much for playing and for the notes! I'll make sure to fix them in a patch ♡ I'm glad u enjoyed the ambiguity too, I wanted players to interpret some things on their own :)) Ty again! 

This was really good, I enjoyed it very much. I also love learning about toxic flowers!!! Also hello chao I'm gonna eat you

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Go ahead 🍽😛😛

The heart's undertaker is fictional, but I tried writing it as realistically as possible. That, and the other flowers mentioned are real, so there was alot of research done T____T I'm so glad someone notices!! Thank you so so much ❤️❤️

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Oh my god I just played through all the endings, and this is now one of my top three favorite visual novels. The endings? Absolutely amazing. And the art is the cherry on top. I can't wait to see if you make more games in the future!!

IM HONORED!! Thank you so much for playing (and getting all the endings!!). Your kind words seriously mean alot to me 🫶🫶

I'm in school to be a doctor, and I just loved the MC's occupation and the chapter names. (Also you know we (yes WE) all think ending 4 is the best)

THANK U I was hoping that people with similar/related occupations as Chao or MC would enjoy LD :) ❤️ 

A fun fact I think you'd like: I got the idea for a specific action in Ending 4 (the fingernail one🤫😛😛) when I was watching House MD LMAO

LMAO that's so real of you

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awesomee!! im so excited for the full game

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Working on it! Thank you sm ♡♡

YOUR ARTSTYLE IS ADORABLE and i love love the  dark undertones chao is hiding... such a cute matcha strawberry guy and yet he secretly knows where i live and uh oh... the bad ending.... ohh i love love LOVE characters that are full of contradictories. 

also,, i love how you wrote MC's character! Such a passionate, thoughtful, kind person when we always see the job of a mortician being depicted in a negative light.  

THANK YOU SO MUCHHH I'm so glad you enjoyed both Chao and the MC!! I want Chao to be subtle but effective so it means alot 🫶 our matcha strawberry guy indeed.... he will be eaten soon

OMGG LOVED IT SM,the artstyle is so adorable!Can't wait for the full game 🩷🩷

AWEEE Thank youuu!! Glad you enjoyed my game ♡

aún no lo he jugado pero le tengo mucha fe<3

I don't speak Spanish but I used a translator, Gracias!! ◝(ᵔᵕᵔ)◜♡

cant wait for the full game, chao is such a cutie vro RAHHH

HBAHSGAF Thank you sm!! (๑>؂•̀๑)

wahhhh i really adore that enviroment in this game... the calming background track and the gentle smile on chaosxiang's face really have me lowering my guard!! i'm looking forward to seeing more of him and mc <3

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Thank you for your kind words!! They motivate me alot 🥺🫶 more of Chao and MC will come in the future <3

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I love the game so far. can't wait to read the continuation of ending 2

OMG thank you so much for making a video on my game!! You have a calming voice and I really like your little comments throughout <3 <3 It means a lot to me, thank you!

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AHH I was wondering when your next game would drop!! I actually saw the link to this on the yanjam server and immediately rushed to play it 🏃🏃🏃

I just want to say this totally blew me out of the water! I really liked being in the MC’s head, their experiences and running thoughts through their mind while embalming, and attitude towards sending off the deceased felt really evocative and I felt super immersed.

Also Chaoxiang is so cute OMGG 😆😆 I really love his design! I tried playing through all the favorable options first. I loved the bits of foreshadowing, and then escalating into that confrontation oh my gosh I was so invested. I really liked the scene where he showed MC the heart’s undertaker, I loved all the double meanings!

When I went back to replay with all the distant options, I was really shocked at how the vibes completely changed! It was way more unsettling and I could really witness the rose colored glasses slipping away, the psychological horror was pulled off super well. And oh my gosh the first ending was so amazingly creepy. The chapter names being themed after organism decay hit especially hard in this branch.

I totally need more, I really want to know what happens next in the continuing branch and im eagerly looking forward to the full version!!

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THANK YOU SO MUCHH! I was worried I didn't convey MC's attitude/thoughts well enough, so I'm glad you enjoyed it! The same goes for the foreshadowing and double meanings. It makes me really happy to see people picking up on it because it's a big part of the mystery I'm trying to build up in this game! 

For now, there are lots of clues I purposefully left for the player's interpretation (Including in the ending ;)) Thank you again for your thoughtful review & comment!! It's really motivating, and it means the world to me (and Chao <3)

It's a very lovely game and I love the art style :DD I can't wait to see the full version! <3

AWWW Thank you so so much!! <33